Jen: This week we welcome Jeffrey B. Allen to Book Talk. Jeffrey, will you please share a short bio with us?
Jeffrey: Born: New Bedford, Massachusetts, 1953.
After moving with my family nine times, I graduated High School from Central Bucks East in Doylestown, Pennsylvania. It was 1971.
I studied art at Bloomsburg University for two years before attending Boston University where I majored in history and minored in set design and fine art. A one year hiatus in the form of a hitchhiking trip helped appease my restless and inquisitive nature. I attribute that early journey to laying the foundations for my strong views on politics and religion. Later, I traveled through Europe and Mexico forming some strong opinions concerning the interpretation of historical fact that obscures the truths underlying foreign and American cultures and the tangled relationships they have and have had to religion. Those years of learning, searching, and questioning have contributed greatly to the philosophical depth of my writing.
I graduated from Millersville State University in architectural design and taught for two years while also working toward my Masters degree at Temple University in Philadelphia. After a brief teaching career, I created my own architectural woodworking firm in 1980.
By 1982, I was owner and president of Artistic Furnishings Incorporated, a design house and manufacturer of custom architectural millwork. The company employed designers, artisans and support staff. My work can be seen throughout eastern Pennsylvania, New York and New Jersey in private residences and businesses.
Today, I reside in Bethlehem Pennsylvania where I still work in the field of interior space planning, although much of my time is devoted to writing.
Jen: Tell us about GoneAway into the Land and where it's available.
Jeffrey: GoneAway into the Land is about a twelve year old boy, John, who suffers under an oppressive and abusive father name Daniel Greber. After a horrific episode of violence, John awakens in a confusing place. He is conflicted by his memory of what happened and the account given him by his mother, who also suffered a beating during the episode. Paramount to this is that Greber stole away with John’s younger sister, Marny.
From that point on in the book the reader is slowly pulled into John’s vow to avenge the abuse, find his sister, Marny and bring an end to his father and the reign of terror. He appropriately names his father, the Beast. The journey begins. As others who have read the book say: “Allen’s writing is extremely powerful, particularly his imagery and masterful descriptions such as when John meets up with “The Beast.” And when all's said and done, we have a novel that is not only amazingly fitting for our times, but one that is rich and rewarding for anyone, young or old, wishing to ponder over insightful questions pertaining to our existence and journey through life.
John steadily grows more confident, indicating that he is growing older. The layer of horror that was the history of his mother Ellie’s life and his own, slowly peal away, further drawing the reader into a philosophical story that transcends the usual fantasy novel. Again I quote: “Using his own unique style and voice, Jeffrey B. Allen with GoneAway into the Land has really stretched the limits of the traditional fantasy novel. Shifting in and out of fantasy, Allen cleverly intertwines the theme of child and spousal abuse with a land of the unknown."
The book can be purchase from Amazon.com, Barnes & Noble.com and many independent bookstores around the country. If they do not have it on the shelf it can easily be ordered. ISBN-978-1-933300-52-3
Jen: At what age did you discover writing and when were you first published? Tell us your call story.
Jeffrey: I was first published in 2008. GoneAway into the Land is my first novel. I always enjoyed writing and I took a lot of time to self teach myself the techniques of good writing. I wrote all through my schooling. I wrote for the newspaper, the school newsletters and I wrote extensively within my field of architectural design. I am still a long away from where I want to be as a writer, but the reviews and comments coming back from my readers are very encouraging, telling me that many are surprised that this is my debut novel. As one reviewer put it:
GoneAway into the Land is a riveting tale of not just John's epic journey, but also our journey through life. The vivid description of "The Beast" is incredible. The remarkable journey is chilling, haunting, and mysterious as it takes the reader to a place with unforgettable consequences. John Greber tugs at the reader's heart as much as Trevor does in PAY IT FORWARD.
Jeffrey B. Allen's GoneAway into the Land transforms into an action - packed adventure that explodes with spectacular special effects, and the reader will indulge into an awe-inspiring experience as if viewing one of Steven Spielberg's finest!
Jen: Describe your writing in three words.
Jeffrey: Honest philosophical fiction.
Jen: Do you have a writing routine?
Jeffrey: Yes, I write when I feel emotional, distraught, sad, angry, elated, and repentant. I edit when I feel complacent, tired, uninspired, and lazy.
Jen: What’s the most challenging aspect of writing? Easiest?
Jeffrey: The most challenging aspect, I thought was the construction of a series of sentences that would hold a reader’s attention and inspire him or her to read more. I found out that promoting a finished novel is much harder; yet it is made easier if the book is well written and timely. Unfortunately, most first time authors do not find that out until we promote our work.
The easiest thing is to say: someday I want to write a book, and then never follow through on that goal.
Jen: What’s the most rewarding aspect?
Jeffrey: I would have to say having people tell me that they cannot put the down after the first one hundred pages, and that they absolutely will refuse any and all interruption during the last one hundred pages.
Jen: Do you do anything special to celebrate a sale, new contract, or release?
Jeffrey: I am looking for an agent. In the absence of a good agent I am enlisting the help of a publicist.
Once the ball is rolling in either of those directions I am sure I will learn the fine art of celebrating. I have never celebrated any of my achievements because I cannot bring myself to view them as achievements. A goal achieved is only a platform for another goal unachieved. It is the way I live my life. It is for that reason that the word retirement is so repugnant to me.
Truthfully, I have as many failures in my life as successes, and I view all as rewarding experiences.
Jen: Is there a genre that you’d like to write?
Jeffrey: Philosophical fiction. My novels will always deal with the infinite spaces I believe exist between life and death. I am a strong believer in the journey of life extending into a timeless experience that, if embraced, brings into question the world we think of as reality. The most striking thing about human existence is that we use the knowledge of our own mortality against ourselves and our fellow man. The instant, in our evolution, when we became self aware altered our existence as a member-species of our planet. Many of us look at our personal achievements as they break down into the decades of our anticipated longevity.
My stories will bend that awareness and take away the fear and the worship of our mortality as we transcend this life and move to another plane of existence without the knowledge of having ever done so. My novels will also explore the past life and the energy that fortunately or unfortunately follows us where ever we go. In GoneAway into the Land, John, the twelve year old boy must reconcile his life, and find answers to deeply seated questions that have haunted him. His problems become universal to the human condition making the story relevant. One last thing. My novels will always be fun to read. I am never preachy. In fact it will be difficult for many readers to find the subliminal messages embedded in the story. This, I think is another reason why so many readers are finding different ways of describing there experience of reading GoneAway into the Land.
Jen: Where do you draw your inspiration?
Jeffrey: From my own life. My tragedies, my childhood, my triumphs, my loves and loves lost,
My fears, and last but not least my imagination. My imagination has always slanted toward the surreal.
Jen: Do you have a favorite character or one that you identify most with?
Jeffrey: In GoneAway into the Land, I became intimate with every character. I still think about them as if they exist in my life, as if at any time I could sit down and write a conversation with one of them and they would answer me back as if they were sitting across the table from me.
My favorite character is the hero, John. He is the one the takes the journey, and he is the one who will ultimately fail or triumph. I live with John everyday.
Jen: What's next for you?
Jeffrey: I am writing another book called Beneath the Quarry Waters. I hope to have it published by the end of the year.
Jen: Where can you be found on the web?
Jeffrey: I have a website. http://www.jeffreyBallen.com. From there one can link to all the online booksellers. My publisher’s web site, facebook or myspace.
Jen: Do you have anything you’d like to ask our readers?
Jeffrey: Yes. Is it really true what the publishers are telling me? Is the American reader so impatient that it has become risky to publish a book with more that 100,000 words? GoneAway into the Land has 153,000 words and most readers are flying through it and enjoying the experience, however, when I initially sent out my manuscript, GoneAway into the Land, to publishers, I received back plenty of letters telling me that they were only considering manuscripts of 100,000 words or less. I hope the American reader is not becoming so impatient with reading to such a degree that unless the story grabs their attention in the first fifty pages they will put it away and go for something else. And I hope that if they see a book that is over 300 pages long they will not opt for something shorter. Just a hope that reading stay alive in our electronic society.
Jen: Thanks so much for being our guest at Book Talk this week. Readers, Jeffrey will be here to answer your questions this week and is giving away an ecopy of GoneAway into the Land to a random commenter. Leave a comment before Thursday, January 15 and you'll be entered in the contest. And please consider leaving your email address in your post or subscribing to the followup comments so it will be easier for us to reach you if you're the winner.
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Hi Jeffrey. Thanks for being our guest at Book Talk.
I always like to know what books authors read. So, who are some of your favorite authors and/or books? What are you reading now?
Jen
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Hi Jeffrey
You said you had traveled Europe and Mexico is there one particular place that was you favorite that you really inspired you?
Wanted to let you know really enjoyed the excerpt.
Please count me in :)
stacie_vaughan@hotmail.com
Jeffrey,
I really enjoyed this interview. It's always fascinating to find out what people do when not writing, or what they did before they got published. I loved how you answered the question about when you write: "I write when I feel emotional, distraught, sad, angry, elated, and repentant. I edit when I feel complacent, tired, uninspired, and lazy."
I love to read, and I don't discriminate against big books. Of course there are times when I want a light easy read, but I also those like big books. I feel like I'm getting more for my money!
I too would like to know what books/authors you enjoy.
-jessica
The book I just finished and the one I am currently reading both have over 300 pages and that has not lessened my enjoyment. I may not be able to read such a book in one reading, but if the book is interesting, I will give it all the time it requires. I am surprised to learn that publishers are even asking for shorter books.
I loved the interview. The book sounds as if it would be hard to read yet all consuming at the same time. I think I would have to stay up all night to finish it!
Gosh, I think I'd be writing all the time if I wrote under those moods. LOL
I don't think there is a problem with books containing more than 100,000 words. I mean look at J.K. Rowling and Stephen King. As long as there is a good story there, people will read them.
Deidre
Great interview. The book sounds very interesting. I don't care how long a book is if the content is gripping. Yours sounds like it would draw you in and make you feel as if your a part of it. Publishers don't know everything, and I am glad to see you kept at it and did it your way...
Dear Jen,
To answer your question about books I have read and authors I enjoy most. That is an easy question and a difficult one as well. I have been an avid reader all of my life. I enjoy good writing. History can be as much a fantasy to me as fiction. For instance, I Claudius is one of my favorite books. In fact, all of Roman history fasinates me. Vincent Cronin is one of the best writers of history I have ever come across. He brings the history alive just as if you were reading a novel. His book on Napoloean and another on Louis XIV were amazing books. I enjoy epic
stories of history such Gulag Archipalago or Nicholas and Alaxander. But still, my favorite books are stories of fiction, however, always with a bent toward scifi or surreal subjects, such as the Dune series by Frank Herbert, The Rama books by Aurthor C. Clark. I enjoyed PD Jame's Children of Men. I've read everything Larry Niven wrote. I like the real science in Michael Crichton's books. And I cannot overlook the classic scifi writers such as Jules Verne or H.G. Wells. See what I mean. I cannot stop. Reading is the best way to learn to write. It is also very important to learn from what others have written. Knowledge should be the foundation of good writing. A reader, especially an avid reader, wants to get something out of the books they read. I would not have been able to write a book such as GoneAway without the gift of knowledge that other writers have given me.
Today I am not reading any book in particular because I am very busy researching my next book call Beneath the Quarry Waters. Although I have a stack of books next to my bed that I will be getting into very soon.
Jeffrey B. Allen
Dear Lisa,
When you live in the US I think it is easy to loose site of the vastness of human history. When I traveled in Mexico I felt in awe of the ancient civilizations, and I felt ashamed at the way they were wiped clean of their rich heritage and deep knowledge. The Europeans, in the name of Christainity erased almost all of what could be learned from the Myans and the Incas. When I went to Tulum and stood in the observatory, I cannot tell you how insignificant I felt. With all of our electronics and modern day miracles here was a place that was well over one thousand years old where the Mayans observed the Universe.
On the other side of the coin, Europe is piled high with layer upon layer of civilizations and empires past. Rome was my favorite place. I could go back there a hundred times and still not see everything there is to see. Another place I think is often overlooked by Americans is Istanbul, where east meets west in more ways that one. It is one of the most beautiful cities I have ever been to, and populated by one of the most diverse populations. Istanbul is friendly, clean, safe, and rich with history.
Thanks for the comment. Please feel free to write to me or comment on my web site.
jeff@jeffreyballen.com
Dear Stacy,
If 'count me in' means you will read GoneAway, I am thrilled. Please leave a review on Amazon.
Also feel free to comment on my website. www.jeffreyballen.com
or write to me - jeff@jeffreyballen.com
Thank you for your comment.
Dear Jessica,
Thank you for thoughtful comment.
In an earlier comment I mentioned what I read. I wish I had time to read more. One book I did not mention, and I know this sounds like a religious thing, but it is absolutely not. The Bible is a book that should be read by all no matter what faith one practices. Knowledge is the one thing that brings people together. Ignorance is what separates us and causes predudice.
The Bible is a book of history as much, if not more, than it is a book of religion.
Thank you also for your comment about big books. I have read, as I am sure you have, some short books that seem like big books as you labor through them. On the other hand there are some very long books that I have flown through and then turned the last page wishing it could continue. Have you ever felt as though you've lost your best friend after finishing a great book?
Thanks again for your comment.
Please feel free to e mail me at Jeff@jeffreyballen.com.
If you do read GoneAway I would be very interested in your comments.
Thanks again,
Jeffrey
Dear GladysMP,
Thank you for your comment. I am glad I did not inadvertantly cut sections from GoneAway just to hit a particular word count. If GoneAway Into the Land continues its upward climb in sales and recognition I think my next book will not find the barriers that GoneAway did. Although I can see now that Beneath the Quarry Waters will not be quite as long.
I hope you will read GoneAway. I think you would enjoy it.
Thanks again for your comment and feel free to write to me at Jeff@jeffreyballen.com or comment on my website at www.jeffreyballen.com
Dear MJ,
GoneAway is getting all kinds of responses in regards to how quickly it reads. All the reviews and comments to date have been very positive. The one thing almost everyone who has reviewed GoneAway has said is that the book grows more difficult to put down the further into it you get. Norm Goldman's review said it very well.
His review is posted on my web site. Another reviewer said the last hundred pages can only be read in one sitting. Staying up all night reading great book that I could not put down is lots of fun. I will search high and low for a book like that. I hope you will read goneAway and tell me about the sunrise you saw because you finished the book at the break of dawn.
Thanks for your comment.
Please write to me at jeff@jeffreyballen.com or comment from my website - www.jeffreyballen.com
Dear Ddurance,
I found your comment very funny.
I do my best writing when my emotions are running on a peak or in a valley. There is no in - between for me. I guess that describes a life of torment. Luckily I am an obsessive editor.
I write and rewrite more times than I care to count. Stephen King wrote a very good book on writing.
One piece of advice I took from his book was to put the manuscript away for a lengthy period of time. Then get it out and read it all the way through. He said, you will be amazed at how bad some of it will seem. He is absolutely right. I write my books in acts, or parts if you will. I put sections of the manuscript away for long periods of time while I work on other sections. When I get them out to read them over is when I make the most progress on that section.
Thank you for your comment.
Please feel free to write to me at jeff@jeffreyballen.com
Thanks again,
Jeffrey
Dear Chrismil19991,
Thank you for your comment. I hope you will read GoneAway. I think it will draw you in as a good novel should. I am pleased with the reviews GoneAway is getting. It is also finding its way into school curricullums and school libraries. Although GoneAway is far from preachy it has an undercurrent that is what I think most readers are finding fascinating. The fantasy of what is taking place in the story, although vivid, becomes secondary to the story, and the struggle that the main character, John Greber, is going through.
The reviews are posted on my web site. www.jeffreyballen.com.
I would be very pleased if you would read GoneAway and tell me what you think through a comment or a review.
Thanks again,
Jeffrey
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I'm very interested to read this novel! Sounds intriguing. nixyvalentine AT gmail DOT com (for contest entry)
As far as length, I often read longer novels and have no problem with books that are over 100K, as long as they are well paced. I read an "epic" book recently that just went on and on and on, and the author seemed to have lost all restraint and discipline. Other long books can seem tight and gripping. So my answer has to be "it depends".
Writing from experience is really the best way to go about writing, I think.
Valorie
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Dear Bollywood girls,
Your blog named reminds me that we are on track to sending GoneAway to some people in hollywood. Many have expressed that they thought the novel would make an excellent movie. I am probably drawing an errant correlation between your blooger name and Hollywood but I couldn't help it. GoneAway is getting some amazing comments and readers are urging me to try and get the attention of producers in the movie business. GoneAway because of its epic nature and especially because of its undercurrent that slides through the story creating more and more suspence as the layers peal away.
Norm Goldman of Bookpleasures said it very well. His review is on my web site.
I hope you will read GoneAway and post your comments on Amazon.com or on my website. www.jeffreyballen.com
Also feel free to write to me with any comments or questions at jeff@jeffreyballen.com.
Thanks again for your comment.
Jeffrey
Dear Web design of New York City,
Thank you for your comment. I hope you will read GoneAway and enjoy its fast pacing. Norm Goldman and Geri Ahearn,along with other reviewers said that the book paces very well and picks up steam as you read, making the last half of the book dfficult to put down.
I would be very pleased to hear your comments as you read and espesially when you have finished.
Thanks again for the comment
Jeffrey B. Allen
www.jeffreyballen.com
Dear Nixy,
You are absolutely correct. I have plodded through long and short books where the author had lost all discipline. I wondered how it ever got published. My editor, Sigrid Macdonald and myself, took almost a year to refine Goneaway so that it built at a steady pace yet grabbed the readers intrigue as early as possible.
Based on the comments thus far, I think we achieved our goal. Now the goal is to get the book in front of the reading public. It's happening.
Word of mouth and steady interviews, such as this one, help a great deal.
Enjoy GoneAway. If you or anyone else would like a signed copy just go to wanderingsagebooks.com, my publisher,and have the book sent to me, whereby I will write whatever you instruct me to write in the front cover , sign it and then I will send it along to you. The only cost to you is the book and the shipping to me. I will take care of all shipping costs back to you, my compliments.
Thank you for your comment.
Enjoy reading GoneaAway Into the Land and keep a lookout for my next book, Beneath the Quarry Waters.
Jeffrey
www.jeffreyballen.com
Dear Valorie,
Reading your e mail adress I think you may have the same feelings at times that I do. That is also a great time to put pen to paper. I am, I think, blessed with a sufficient degree of ups and downs aas well as breathers in the middle to make me a fairly stable person, although I dive head first into the times when my emotions are at there lowest or highest. That is when it all pours out me.
As far as knowledge goes. I found there are two types of knowledge. One is how smart I felt when I graduated from college. Yes I had a dereee that said I was now smart, and yes, I had learned a great deal. But I think of a deaper knowledge that builds on that experience and is based on a series of life altering lessons or events. That is deep knowledge that comes by sucking in everything around you, good or bad, as you journey through life. Absorbe it, analyze it, mold it and shape it, and then pocket it for future use.
I hope you will read GoneAway, and I know you will enjoy it. Again, by your e mail address, I think you would be a perfect fit for the story within the pages of GoneAway Into the Land.
Thanks again,
Jeffrey
www.Jeffreyballen.com
This book looks very interesting. I enjoyed reading your interview. thanks
Dear Debby, Thank you very much. I would love you to read the book.
I can't tell you how gratifying it has been to get back the wonderful comments and reviews from people who have read it. My goal when I set out to write the story was said to be overly ambitious, and that it may not be able to be pulled off. The wonderful thing about what has been happening is that the fantasy,although vivid and unique in it's own right, is usurped by the story of John's journey to reconcile his life. The layers slowly peel the fantasy away, revealing a rich story of life's trials, tribulations and triumphs. Most readers become totally engrossed in John's struggle against impossible odds that tend to stack up against all of us at times. When you read Norm Goldman's review on my web site, I think you will understand more of what I mean. He put it very well.
Enjoy the book. If you would like a signed copy please write to me at Jeff@jeffreyballen.com and I will explain the procedure. Also I ask you, if are so inclined, to write a review on Amazon.
Thank you again for your kind comment. Enjoy the read.
Jeffrey
It is the last day of my interview.
Thank you to all. The comments were thoughtful and insightful. For you, I will continue to write.
If you belong to facebook please click on the facebook icon on my website, or go onto the site and search for me. I would love you to become a fan. That way I will be able to keep you updated on the progress of GoneAway and my new stories to come.
There is a song called GoneAway by Lisa Schwartz. If you have read my book, the song becomes hauntingly beautiful. Although it is a beautiful song in its own right as well. I hope to contact her so I can talk to her about her song.
Peace to all. I want to speak with you again, so stay in touch through the website.
www.jeffreyballen.com
Jeffrey B. Allen
Jeff,
It certainly is sad that many publishers are limiting their submissions to books under 100,000 words. The only thing that I can say that's really hopeful and contrary is that all of JK Rowling's books, with the exception of the first one, are well over 100,000 and I read every one. So did my nephew and millions of other young adults and teens, which is your market. Thus, the kids are *way* ahead of the publishers. They know what they want to read and if it's good, they're not that restless or impatient. That's what you're finding with your readers.
Sigrid
Many thanks to all of you who stopped by this week to support Jeffrey and learn about his novel.
And we have a winner to announce for an ecopy of GoneAway...
MJ you're our winner. I need you to contact me at admin.bookblogATgmail.com by next Thursday, January 22 to claim your prize or another winner will be chosen.
Congratulations MJ.
I know will enjoy GoneAway into the Land.
My hope is that you will write a review on Amazon when you are finished. Please feel free to contact me at jeff@jeffreyballen.com if you want a signed copy of the novel and will give you the procedure.
Regards,
jeffrey B. Allen